Friday, September 27, 2013

A Neat Comet (Nature Nature Nature Nature) Comments

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A comet came with a large metal core
Racing ‘cross the heavens toward the sun it tore
It started to shed its frozen surface
Of gasses, vapors, and minerals it bore
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Udiah (witness to Yah)
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a very good poem pertaining to the comet which is nature's wonderful scenery when it arrives and comes to our sight.

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Awa Bah 09 April 2014

ths poem is neat just as the tittle

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V P Mahur 11 March 2014

Dear udiah the creation and destruction is the law of Nature. I like your way of expression. 'Swing of Spring' The soft swing of fresh air Has brought joyous glare Moist with drenching love Engaged in the idol affair ............................ ...................... I want to share this poem with you. full of it you can find on my page.

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