A Naughty Beloved Comments
When I am dejected, frustrated and insane,
I look a way out in a closed dark lane,
And I don’t find a way out, I shout and cry,
My friend is a foe; she is sleeping on sky,
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A true love has no ending is what I depicted. Loved reading it.
A very good depiction of love with unending hopes, as I say..... One cannot live but other But DEATH will not listen either, Mortality, thus kills and destroys The immortal love nest. You may read my poem Timeless
A good message to the universe saint Kabirdas gave. Remembering the great saint we make ourselves more happier and the poem is so good.
Sir, the pleasure derived out of this poem is unmatched. What an emotional scene and act has been enacted. Thank you, Akhtar Jawad Sahab. Let me quote a few lines: I say to myself, I’m merely a toy of clay / Break me, break me, I’m tired of this play.
Hope follows the belief, a beautiful write....................10
At frustrating moments hope comes disguised as a beloved! Great metaphor!
At frustrating moments hope comes disguised as beloved! Great metaphor!
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7/28/2025 1:31:46 PM # 1.0.0
A Beautiful write. Even in midst of frustration if one can feel the breeze of hope and love, sure the happiness will stay in heart. A positive write. Loved reading it.