Monday, August 4, 2008

A Natural Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Birds twittering sweet melodies in the morning
Fragrance of a rain spreading in the gentle breeze
Rustling leaves in a forest of trees
Leash of foxes running free to the wild
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Hemakumar Nanayakkara
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Kathleen West 07 October 2008

Your poem brought a smile to my face with purity of it...Best regards, Kathleen

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Thad Wilk 17 August 2008

Nature has wondrous beauty and it has been here a while But it can't beat or compete with the sensation of - A natural smile! ! *10*! ! A splendid read Hemakumar! Best wishes, Friend Thad

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Linda Moore 11 August 2008

Every line made me smile at the thought of them. Smiles something you can give away and are most often returned to you. A real feel good poem Linda

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Evelyn de Lara 11 August 2008

That was beautiful. I was able to picture everything. Very well written.

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Viola Grey 10 August 2008

beautifully painted right down to the last line...great work

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Sandra Fowler 09 August 2008

A celebration of nature and, at the end of your poem, the warmth of a human smile. Beautiful write, my poet friend. Ten from me. As always, Sandra

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Lauren Watkins 09 August 2008

Wonderful write, especially as natural smiles seem to be endangered species these days.

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Kesav Easwaran 08 August 2008

this poem yours on natue is a poetic natural smile...well done HN... votes ten

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Vilma Xelin 08 August 2008

Very fresh your poem! I could feel the air around me while i read it! I just love it! thanks for sharing!

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Wendy Bureau 07 August 2008

Oh Bravo Poet.. such a vivid picture you have written..thank you for taking me off on a stroll with Mother Nature.. *smiles*

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Lynda Robson 06 August 2008

What a lovely uplifting poem you have written here, and you are so right, a smile means so much, 10 Lynda xx

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Tia Metcher 05 August 2008

'Hi! ', This is outstanding piece of poetry. you have done brilliantly displaying vivid picture imagery, that was written and structured well. I love nature. WELL DONE! Cheers :)

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Ency Bearis 04 August 2008

nice descriptive write of how beautiful is nature and you are right smile is sweet and beautiful from every persons nature...great write.... Best Wishes, Ency Bearis

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Dawn Slanker 04 August 2008

of all things beautiful, nothing is more beautiful than a natural smile or the warm fuzzy feeling bestowed on the one receiving the smile. Lovely sentiment and so true.

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Heart Felt 04 August 2008

You bring into beautiful relief all the things that nature is wonderful for.

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Colombo / Sri Lanka
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