Tuesday, January 3, 2006

A Natural Shower Comments

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on the other side,
of the heavily streamed window,
down on the street below,
under the dimmed light from the lampost,
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Oluwaseun Ogunbiyi 03 January 2006

Pretty outstanding for modern times. excellen attempt. Please read my poems and comment on it too. Please do not be sentimental.

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Sandra Fowler 03 January 2006

Fine imagery. You paint well with words. You brought your street alive for me.thank you for sharing. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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