A Nap............... Comments

Very nice poem on sleep scripted with wonderful words.......kudos!

Open eyes to the beam of light Promise that was fulfilled by his side Back to life with the entire verve! ! ! An universal message.

When we fall asleep, we are blissfully forgetful of everything and we are taken to a strange shore until sunlight comes again to awaken us from our sleep.... After enough rest, we greet the new day with a fresh verve....Nice poem, Salini!