Thursday, April 17, 2014

A Nap............... Comments

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Feel lament
In a vague mode the stranger bang
It knocks the eye lashes
Strive to open with all the vigor
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SALINI NAIR
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 November 2014

Very nice poem on sleep scripted with wonderful words.......kudos!

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2014

Open eyes to the beam of light Promise that was fulfilled by his side Back to life with the entire verve! ! ! An universal message.

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Valsa George 18 April 2014

When we fall asleep, we are blissfully forgetful of everything and we are taken to a strange shore until sunlight comes again to awaken us from our sleep.... After enough rest, we greet the new day with a fresh verve....Nice poem, Salini!

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