Sunday, February 17, 2008

A Nano Second Comments

Rating: 5.0

A moment in time
Awake, only forward bound
Profound beliefs
Brief appearance, an episode
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Charles Hughes
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Tom J. Mariani 19 February 2008

Your use of short choppy lines intensifies your images of nano seconds passing. Your poem made my time stand still. Great job. You lived up to the recommendation I got from you-know-who. Tom

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Carol Rhodes 18 February 2008

ANOTHER REASON TO LIVE IN THE MOMENT AND TO STRESS CONTENTMENT, TO SEEK THE BRIGHTER SIDE OF LIFE. WELL PUT, MR. HUGHES. LOTS OF CREATIVE IMAGERY.

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