A moment in time
Awake, only forward bound
Profound beliefs
Brief appearance, an episode
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ANOTHER REASON TO LIVE IN THE MOMENT AND TO STRESS CONTENTMENT, TO SEEK THE BRIGHTER SIDE OF LIFE. WELL PUT, MR. HUGHES. LOTS OF CREATIVE IMAGERY.
Your use of short choppy lines intensifies your images of nano seconds passing. Your poem made my time stand still. Great job. You lived up to the recommendation I got from you-know-who. Tom