A Nameless Girl Comments

Well penned with clarity of thought. A highly relatable experience

a reading of this poem of alienation is enough to justify your name...this nameless girl is any girl anywhere!

hi, i was just looking around and i read your poem and it is amazing. i loved it! you should come read some of my poems. i felt the poem and its emotion, i think you might like so of mine.

This is compelling piece about the pain of alienation - a cry for help from someone without confidence and self-esteem. Your mask metaphor is great and so, too is the layout of this piece - it flows really well and I believe it gets more fluent as it goes along. You might find a bit of judicious pruning in the earlier lines wouldn't go astray, but all in all, a great poem. love, Allie xxxx

Thanks for sharing this