A Name For My Daughter Comments

lovely poem you've written.

a.love for kids and daughter. indeed wonderful. voted10 surya

Daughters are divine gift. A comely poem.

lovvvvvvvvli poem i lovvvvvvvvv vit -10 anjali

this poem is very touching. I love it

The content of this is beautiful, but it would benefit from a little revision, possibly adding some punctuation.

Hamid, a lovely poem. I too love my daughter greatly. Daughters are embodiments of love & affection and no wonder we get swayed. As in your apt words, they are truly beautiful in their innermost heart beyond imagination.

I really enjoyed reading this although I believe Saurabh Som was right about the rythme not being definite. There are two things I would write differently. I would change this lines: 'dressed in clothes of silk ' to this: 'dressed in silk cloth' I would also change the 'tis' in the last line to 'it's' Overall, you've captured the emotion perfectly and I believe the impact poetry has emotionally on it's readers is by far the most important thing. In this you have succeed where many others don't. Well done.

Hi man you really impressed me.. this is a poem reflecting the matured innocence... nice thought keep the spirt alive.. live in present think the future gr8 attitude...

Ah, name with such thought put into it. :)

nawwwh! ! soo cute! ! good luck with it all....happy writting and happy fatherhood =] peace ox. Kaila ♥

A wonderful poem Hamid. As a father myself, I can relate to this poem particularly well. You really hit the nail on the head. Very well written with great insight for a man of just 18.

Wow! incredible insight for a man so young. You'll be a wonderful father someday. Very nicely penned....Can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work! Cathleen

A wonderful piece of work Hamid, very well constructed too. Andrew

this is a good poem i love it keep it up

Wow! I do like this poem. So much emotion and the imagery is wonderful I really like the lines, 'a name for angels, beautiful beyond imagining.' Children are truly a gift from God. Thanks Richard

very idealistic and yet attainable, great metaphors...

There's no gift more beautiful than that of having a daughter. As a mother I can identify with your poem so well.

hmm.... its different..... but forgive me for saying this... the rhyming here is not that definite........ this particuler poem's potentials are not tapped enough.... you need to polish it a bit more to make it a perfect one... the reason I'm saying this is because i bliv that this poem CAN one of those rare PERFECT poems! and u do certainly know how to mesmerise people! anyways...those were MY opinions only..... others may think other wise..and i may be wrong...and I often am keep penning [ :) ]

Another fantasy of paternity, this time for a daughter. This is more idealized than the previous for a son, of course. However both are important.