Tuesday, September 11, 2012

A Name! Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am a rose and don't like my pose,
Pictures of mine gross and cross,
I want to change into another to admin:
Single petal or multi petal jasmine,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Ruby Mostazir 19 May 2013

awesome...................xxx thnks 4 read & comments on my poem.

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Valsa George 21 September 2012

The grass is always greener on the other side! No one is able to enjoy his own state, he longs to be the other man and that lands him in his sorry plight! A great allusive write!

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Thomas Hsi 20 September 2012

Very interesting poem, great imagination.

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Meera Panigrahi 11 September 2012

Using different flowers to bring out special qualities one can possess is a very original idea.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 11 September 2012

So meaningful and great. the sense of a soft feeling is appeared here as well nice work

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Chandra Thiagarajan 11 September 2012

Oh! what a splendid imagination! Each one desires for the pastures green on the other side distant. That thought is metaphorically spelt out.Kudos. Thanks and regards.

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