A Naked Language Comments

An amazing naked language is barely heard from heart's beat. A muted tongue observes the captivity. Slowly vanishing from the horizon pressed air gives here breath. This is really very interesting sharing. An amazing poem this is. Congratulations! ..10

The silence and solitude illustrated with a balanced way to imagine the language of subconscious. Nice catch. Thanks.

Out of the imprisonment of fear surfaced this elegant and profound poem. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

The heart is deceived by a muted tongue, Excelent

Heart is hard pressed for want of words to say in a naked and open way! It is human experience in life sure, my friend! congratulations for your Poem of the Day!

a powerful write of feelings felt when in fear? ...........well written.

A muted tongue! ! Thanks for sharing.

The helpless men suffocating in a vacuum, speaking where there is no medium to transform there speech in sound waves that can propagate. A perfect selection as members poem of the day, congrats.

Word's gravity.... congrats on being picked... a highest 10+++++++

A thought provoking poem. We are living blind to life's happenings.

Great thought provoking poem. So often we're frightened of saying what we feel for fear of rejection. I really enjoyed reading and thinking about your words, thank you x

hats off! sir, sometimes you create poems on the unthinkables-communication problem

great, I love the words u chose to express your feelings,

You've captured the frustrations of communication and yet we continue to write...we're so lucky to have poetry, however imperfect...

a heart that will not speak, will wither and die, and the only ones that will know of this love will be you and i. a powerful write my brother!

a heart that is afraid to speak will wither and die and the only thing left will be you and i, to speak of a love gone by. very strong write my brother!

Word's gravity seems to be pulling even below the surface of the ground. Excellent expression and an excellent poem.

My dear friend, you are a great poet. The poem is very touchy. The sentiments are very poignant. Your description is very effective. Loved to read. Thanks for sharing.....