A Mysterious Voice Comments
From here and there
I hear him speak
His voice, falling in mild whispers
But he always plays hide n’ seek
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“I am CON- SCI-ENCE, your alter ego Listen to me, you shall not stray’’! A great poem by any standards, Really appreciated the breakup of conscience as CON_SCI_ENCE, like breakup of History as His-Story.
Such a phenomenal piece.......Valsa.......I am really lost in my conscience.........You are amazing....a sure 10
Great poem about our conscience that we seldom listen to, he is always here trying to stop us from doing wrong things but we don't listen and that's why we find ourselves n predicaments. Thanks for sharing this fantastic poem Valsa. Siya_! !
This is fantastic, Valsa. I really love it when I meet and read poems that express the same ideas as mine in a different way. You were very right that we both express the same ideas in this poem and in the whiff of conscience on my page. The mysterious voice, our conscience, an excellent poem. Many thanks for pointing this out.
A beautiful poem...Loved reading it.. Thank you Valsa, for the beautiful comments on my 100th poem...
Oh! What an excellent poem, Valsa! How well you have poetically described the CONSCIENCE! Yes! If we ever act as per the dictates of our conscience, we shall never stray! GREAT!
Thank....! I initially thought you were referring to Him. Your poignant narrative is superb!
wow! you have taken the reader surprisingly to the end personifying an abstract idea, I felt I am walking through a lane with many twists and turns and suddenly reached an amazing, unexpected spot...believe Valsa ma'am I experienced this.
A great journey of language and inner distance and places to reveal our most inner core that only truely works away from the noise and pressure of daily persuits. A charachter of calm that will with wisdom guide each of us individually. Thought provoking indeed.
The voice is always calling leaving echoes. Nice poem.
In the hall of stillness, I like it. very good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
Oh, we seem to have a dualality of mind. Do this or do that, only our conscience to guide us. Lovely poem Valsa worthy 10.
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7/19/2025 9:45:41 AM # 1.0.0
A beautiful, thought provoking encounter with self. Searching within unveils great wisdom. Thank you.