Thursday, May 21, 2020

A Muted World Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was a defined moment
When I left my muted world
From marriage in name only
And a place for the lonely which
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Romeo Della Valle
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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 May 2020

A steady flow of emotions through out the poem shows a straight forward simple person and his decision making. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 May 2020

Decisions you made in a hasty array of emotion and that was a hasty moment. But marriage was fixed. There was a defined moment when you left the world. Still heart and soul spoke nice word and made you emotional. This poem is excellently penned that pours emotion in reader's mind...10

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Romeo Della Valle

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