In the sweet songs
Of the stream
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Only feeling, Only thrilling, Chilled thoughts Echoes, in the corridor of mind. beautiful superb loving expression superb 10+++++++++++++++++
In the sweet songs Of the stream Snaking through the Heart of the forest, Some strange feelings Knock at The door of my heart. - - - - - - A beautiful poetic expression to describe the deep feelings that captivate our body, mind and spirit.
MY HEART SANG A SONG,A SONG OF LOVE AFTER READ THIS POEM. THANK YOU.
one topic is moon? i don't remember 'seeing' a moon here; i only read it once, the poem. once was enough to enjoy it a great deal and to send it to MyPoemList. bri ;)
the salient features of mute love- Only feeling, Only thrilling, Chilled thoughts Echoes, in the corridor of mind. great 10+++
A wonderful imaginative nature write mixed with love. Beautiful thoughts and words are embedded in this piece. A pure poetic joy that touches the heart and lingers in the mind. Beautifully crafted.10
Tons vision Tons of thoughts Tons of sounds Birds fluttering, Tinkling stream, Sweet notes, Sweet fragrances, No Earth below, No sky above, Only me, Only me, - - - - - - - Tons of emotions, the heart sings mute song of love- - -but mind finds no words to express this beautiful feeling.- - - - - A wonderful poem.
A River like you have shown is an emblem of an Anaconda hope you know lovely serpent strikes again and again man still hopes to regain the love of life all way through the Anaconda is the only KNOW way all say
In all my life I have never got as many comments as you have on only just one compose o poet you have the genes and sperms You rekindle those moments of ecstasy - - which i suffered - -as in my youth... You have the notes/vibes of a lover too - -RR ''''- - of you both Dawn and I would've be proud..even if she were to return for a moment ere comes my last dawn just in case you miss it
Beautiful rendition with lovely images of beauty embellished in sonorous poetic rhythm with conviction. Insightful and passionate. Thanks for sharing Rout and do remain enriched.
LOVELY PICTURE BUT YOU SNAKED AWAY NO MORE POETRY TILL DATE TODAY
Words of sweet song motivate mind with broader natural perception. Nature has power to direct light of beauty towards mind. Sweetness of life is beautifully expressed in songs. An amazing and brilliantly penned poem is nicely presented...10
You have captured an exquisite moment of heavenly feeling on watching the beauty of a winding stream with its soft music falling in your ears and filling you with a rare ecstasy which has no words to translate it. You then experience a love so ethereal which sends goose bumps all over your body making you so weightless that you start levitating in the air! Nature can sometimes create such surrealistic experiences in us. Beautiful.....!
I love the way how your poem sings. Thank you for sharing this delightful piece.
Echoes, in the corridor of mind.- - - - a well done image and I like the word choice of corridor instead of halls or hallways. In poetry, word choice is dreadfully important- so much so that I find myself sometimes searching for the right word for hours! ! Excellent piece. Looking forward to reading new poems by you.! !
Wow! What a nice poem. Thanks for sharing.