A Musical Entreaty Comments

Nice piece of work! To use the opportunities of life.

Dear Bri, Though the poem isn't about me how I wish it should have been me! Thanks for reviewing the poem and for your appreciation.

you old 'romantic', you! ! the female readers should appreciate this. did SHE say yes? or isn't this about you? well, though a male, i appreciated this. :) bri p.s. thanks for Poet's Note.

Had you left the pipe alone you would not have made us all smile. You just made me think of the Pied Piper. Thank You

the last line just was a swift turn to the whole of the poem...very beautiflly you have highlighted a message that whatever opportunity comes our way, we must make good use of it, rather repent at a later stage

For those who have eyes, gems are strewn on our way! We need pick them! If we can polish them with our effort, they will shine with sparkling brilliance! The metaphor of the flute with the melody from it is quite striking!

A wise message conveyed beautifully, with an unexpected and sweet line at the end. Loved it!

When patience and perseverance go hand in hand, the result is always music to the ears. Let it be a duet with your muse. Let there be a lasting celebration. Thanks, for sharing this poem, Rajesh ji.

Though I am not a complete introvert Rajendran-ji, I do certainly admit to such tendencies. Thanks for reviewing the poem and for your wonderful comments.

WOW! What a message! And that call to the sweetie is the icing on the cake. How did you call yourself an introvert recently, Rajesh-ji? !