Friday, February 27, 2009

A Murderous Season Comments

Rating: 5.0

His dark majesty rode in with fluttering cape shrouding the day
With no bugles to herald, no chorus chanting his usurping of the light
The people in the village huddled and together trembled with fright
Pulled down the shades and barricaded the doors of straw and mud
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Eddie Roa
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A stunning display of how poetic narrative should be architected & delivered...Outsatanding piece of work, Eddie... F j R 2009

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Seema Chowdhury 04 March 2009

a very nice narrative and descriptive story. thanks for sharing.

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Lynda Robson 02 March 2009

Dark and mysterious, great imagery Eddie, well done, 10 Lynda xx

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 01 March 2009

Very good poem. It is presented well.

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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