Monday, September 11, 2006

A Murder Of Time Comments

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Looking far and wide,
My vision now collides,
A thing hard to recognise,
In it's own disguise.
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ARSHAJ GAIKWAD
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Priyanka Shinde 13 September 2006

hey the poem is nice ya.. but as being a critic of literary stuff i feel tht the word slay is over used tht it takes the over all effect of poem.. secondly it is kinda in code..what is ur picture of the 'she' might not be well perceived..so could u explain what tht is? ?

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