A Mud Puddle Comments

Who hasn't sped through a big mud puddle in their car?

Even birds frequent mud puddles!

very true.I have enjoyed many times in my bucolic childhood days. Thanks for the poetic touch.

Children love to play in puddles. They are not worried that their dress get dirtied.....! Cleaning them up will be their mothers' headache! It is a place where they play with paper boats. You have brought nostalgic memories to my mind!

Nice imagery nice visual. I am able to see a boy playing in a pool there.10+

A brilliant poem so immaculately drafted....wonderful choice of diction! My pleasure reading this beautiful poem time and again with great satisfaction!

It surely is, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, especially when his mother does not pay attention. A well known scene after a long heavy storm you so well portrayed. Ah, a boy's great playground. A brilliant summing up and so true. A 10 ++++++++++ and much much more. Thank you so much for sharing.

Playing in the mud! ! After the rain. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Yes, a scene I see in my neighbourhood, monsoon being on. Also a lovely metaphor on 'storm',

Not only an aftermaths of a long heavy storm, a metaphor of emotional storms and its after effects. A poem is sometimes a mud puddle that is left behind after heavy emotional storms. A great three liner with a lot of meanings.

A splendid haiku. Thoughtful. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

An excellent three liner! Thoroughly enjoyed...........................................................10

A fantastic haiku, dear ate Rose.....10+++

Excellent RM! Reminds me of my childhood! A 10 and straight to my list

This poem describes my nephewr. Definitely a mud puddler.