Monday, September 29, 2008

A Mouth's Bitter Cry Comments

Rating: 5.0

My breath envies its distance
As it wants to mingle with
The misty warmth that tempts it
Coming from the sinful rift
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Airda Jones
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Kesav Easwaran 29 September 2008

good poem, Airda...love feelings well expressed in good poetic lines...ten for this write

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