Friday, November 30, 2012

A Mouse In My Stomach.....[long; Human Body; Animals] Comments

Rating: 4.3

[added September 12, 2016, at the suggestion of PH member Stephen Katona, who claims his dad had a coughing fit after Steve read this aloud to
his 'dad' as his father was eating his porridge: 'WARNING: THIS POEM MAY ENDANGER YOUR HEALTH......choking hazard! ! ']
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Koffi B Sossou 05 November 2023

Yes, there is no Tumor but Humor, Bri. You blew the Rumor out of proportion. Lol

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2023

Ok, I took the time to read this today and found ONE TYPO! ! ! That's not TOO bad. : ( bri

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2023

ooops! ! ! TYPO: 'ask my WHY.' 'ask me WHY', ....of course! ! : )

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2023

Oh, my goodness. I read here comments from only FIVE others besides me. Well, that is one of the 'downs' about putting a poem on PH. : )))

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Kim Barney 12 April 2023

Thank goodness they found no tumors! You're in good health, Bri!

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2023

good enough.....PHYSICALLY, at least! : ) Hiya, Kim. : ))

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Bri Edwards 12 April 2023

OOPS, I MEANT TO GIVE THE POEM 5 STARS AND only gave 3 : (

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Bri Edwards 12 April 2023

they are still kicking after 10 yera: the mouse, etc., AND me!

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2023

OOPS! 'years', NOT 'yera' Duh! ! !

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Savita Tyagi 23 February 2020

I see those little typos in my comment. Not good specially with a sharp eye person. I JUST HAVE TO REMEMBER TO REREAD MY COMMENT AND ENLARGE THE LETTERS.

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Savita Tyagi 23 February 2020

I like Valsa's comment! your humor runs roit! Lol and Hahaha all the way. I find those free offers annoying too but to take an offer and turn it in such a funny poemis sure taking that offer. Thanks for letting me know about the poem.

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2023

So, my friend Savita makes a typo error also! 'riot', not 'roit', BUT I think 'roit' SHOULD BE A word! ! !

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Laurie Van Der Hart 03 July 2018

Ah, Bri, you're a breath of fresh air. I'm gonna keep this one and pull it out on rainy, miserable days. It really made me laugh out loud.

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2023

Laurie, feel free to frolic with the poem on rainy days as well! ! : )

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Ruth Walters 31 July 2013

wow, you're full of critters, poor Bri heh heh Very good read....thank you

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2023

De nada, dear Ruth! ! : ))))

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Valsa George 20 May 2013

Oh! My God! I pity your wife..... With all the bees, crabs and rodents running in and out of the secret crevices of your body, what will she do? Hmmm....... your humour runs riot! ! You have no tumour..... no doubt! ! Only HUMOUR....! !

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2023

I 'love' you, Valsa. : ) many happy days ahead I wish for YOU! ! : ) bri

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