Sunday, January 6, 2013

A Mourning Interrupted Comments

Rating: 4.5

The veil rose and fell with the wind
In front of her eyes as if waving farewell.
Her senses were muted,
Her unpainted lips moved
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Argentine Tango
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Rick Elpers 12 January 2013

Amanda/Argentine, this is a beautiful poem. My comments could never do it justice. Suffice to say, to read it is a privilege. Pure artistry! ! ! Dark and illuminating.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 11 January 2013

Wow a fantastic dark poem. D mention of apollo adds to d flavor. And d begining two lines r my best, so admirable.

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