Wednesday, December 16, 2020

A Mourning Dove Comments

Rating: 4.8

A dove wanted to sail with the moon
But settled with the lily the moon

Half way flown the dove up the sky
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Indira Renganathan
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 December 2020

Woke up from the dream the dove Saw itself on the tree..moaned coo ~ ~ ~impressive concluding. Dream of birds is well executed. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Five stars.

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Valsa George 18 December 2020

Birds too have dreams. Dreams of unfulfilled desires make them sad just like human beings feel! The pigeon's experience of flying with the moon was just a dream. This realization makes the bird sad! Well depicted!

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Kesav Easwaran 17 December 2020

Enjoyed your pigeon dream. Nice poetic expression.5 stars

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 December 2020

A very sweet poem. Enjoyed thoroughly. Nicely crafted. Thanks for sharing.

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Varsha M 16 December 2020

This is really sad one ma'am. The dream was really difficult. Both moon and five moaned

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