A Mountshannon October Morning Comments

Your lyrical words capture the movement of the morning in this fine descriptive piece. A perceptive and mellow write with some superb images. In particular I love 'the sun edged its way into the sky'. Great poem. Love, Allie xxxx

What a beautiful scenery you have painted here, David..a very very beautiful write! i wish i was also there..Thanks for the very refreshing sharing David.. hugs, Meggie

What beautiful scenery you have conjured up in the mind of this reader, your magical words and pen did more for me than taking a picture could ever have! This is a beautiful write David, many kudos to you! Hugs, Lee

BRILLIANT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 'The sun edged its way into the sky, from behind the sleeping mountains, spreading red and oranged fingers to touch the retreating night clouds. Now that's what I call poetry worth staying on PH for, amazing work here David What a great guy Love duncan X

Your a artist my friend, first you paint the scene then drag the reader in, then make us feel the early morning breeze, thank you for the dream...10

Stunning write, David...absolutely capturing...Smooth, and cascading stucture...Magnificent employment of imagework, and mind-pleasing vernacular. Top Marks from this writer indeed! FjcR