Tuesday, June 25, 2013

A Mountain Comments

Rating: 4.3

I’m going to build a mountain
With every part of me
The base will be strong and sturdy
That of my ankles to my knees
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Oscar Robles
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Howard Savage 05 January 2016

High places are often built with strong foundations. Great vision and imagination.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 February 2014

Wow an aweinspiring poem u built up! The mount metaphor is great to read. Nice to read u again.

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Mehri Mehraban 01 July 2013

Your mountain attracts me, my vote for your mountain is 7

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Patricia Grantham 29 June 2013

I really love this poem. The mountain is a very majestic act of nature. Some people risk their lives to get to the top. Your mountain in this write seems very formidable. Thanks for sharing this write. I have a poem called Top of the Mountain. Please read when you have time.

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Oscar Robles

Oscar Robles

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