Thursday, November 15, 2012

A Mothers Prayer Comments

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She can see you,
Up there in the clouds,
Pretending to be little stars,
But she knows exactly what you are,
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Tammi Tomlinson
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Jahan Zeb 18 November 2012

An innocent poem really. Mothers are so caring. Lovely. Good stanza at the end to conclude the poem. As he grows he will learn, Of how you came to pass, Look after him sweet angels, That's all mummy has to ask.

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Tammi Tomlinson

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