Wednesday, August 24, 2016

A Mothers' Prayer Comments

Rating: 4.3

Tomorrow will come, if you will it O Lord
I have me a bunch of twins to raise
I have to smoothly cruise on this potholed road
I have a fully fed man to amaze
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Jeresi Katusime
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Chinedu Dike 18 February 2018

Your devotional piece captures the intricacies of motherhood. A well texted and nicely conceived poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Brian Mawadri 14 May 2017

This is beautiful.....it deserves a 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2016

If Lord will twist time with boon and the fortune then tomorrow will come as bright as we hope. Very sweet thought has come for children from a mother's heart and mind. This poem is very affectionate and EXCELLENT...10

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Jeresi Katusime 25 August 2016

Thank you Kumarmani

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Sumit Ganguly 24 August 2016

The poem echoes the tune of poet.10

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Jeresi Katusime 25 August 2016

Thank you Sumit

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