A Mothers Pain Comments

Oh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is one of the most painful of pains. You expressed it so painfully.

You've conveyed the pain and frustration of a mother watching her son and remembering how he used to be - this must be one of the hardest things any person has to do. Your poem shows the love you have for your son, in a sensitive and caring way. Well-written, Jeanette. A great first poem on this site. Fran xx

Hesitant at first -he does-he fails-he tries again All the while he knows- I am there by his side Ready to lend a helping hand-to cushion his fall I have seen the pain in his eyes—the tears on his cheeks now your feelings makes us to handle ours vigorously