Monday, July 14, 2008

A Mothers Lullaby Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shadows whisper in the dark of the night
Babies cry out in fright
They are afraid and only one thing
will wisk it all away.
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Ashley burnam
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Bonnie Collins 27 July 2008

HI Ashley This is penned with so much tenderness and security that only comes from a mother's quiet soft voice that is either instilled in all of us, or for some the absence of it, which can bring many perplexing emotions, I enjoyed this as it represents all that a mother can do for her children to make them who they are today...... Enjoyed very much and hope you are doing well... Bonnie Collins

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, aryaindia 19 July 2008

The sentiments of a parent are highlighted here in all dexterity and your skill of saying so much in such few words is amazing. ARya

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 July 2008

I bet Peerbocus really liked this one. I sure did as well. This is a 10. It is a 10 because it is a poem that is as simple and directed as all great things are at their core. I hope other readers will take note of this poem. It is a great learning tool. GW62

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