Wednesday, September 27, 2017

A Mothers Death Comments

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Why did you go living me alone in dark,
with fear and trouble all alone.
When I was small you use to tell me,
you would always be with me.
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Nilay Vyas
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 April 2019

You stopped your breath in laps of mine, but still you are always there with me. Your last sentence was, 'I AM ALWAYS THERE WITH YOU' what a wonderful eulogy on your beloved and most loving mother, thank u dear poet. tony´´´´

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 September 2017

You gave me birth, after a great sacrifice. You took me to swings in my childhood, you made me capable to stand in legs. How could I ever forget you? A beautiful ode to your great loving mom, dear Nilay. We all have the same pain one day. The dearest on Earth leaves us for all eternity, still we have to respect her last wishes, to keep her dearest treasure healthy and safe and secure- her child. Love and respect your own life. She would be happy wherever she is. An amazing poem shared. 10+++ for it. Regards. Subhas

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Nilay Vyas 16 October 2017

I am pleasured to see your well brightened emotions towards the poem

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