Wednesday, April 22, 2009

A Motherless Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today
motherless
I wonder
what I missed..
...
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lalitha iyer
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Uma Ram 13 May 2015

Awesome mam, the deep pain oozes out through the words...nicely written. thank you mam.

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Motherless day an sad memory.... very good description. It is our emotional attachment. very god write..10 rad mine O.mother, papado u know and papa you too? ..

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Eyan Desir 15 May 2009

Loved your flow good write

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Indira Renganathan 04 May 2009

An excellent portrayal of mother's affection...words can not fill her absence though...a wonderful poem

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Lee Crowell 01 May 2009

Lalitha I personally relate to this poem because I have been motherless since I was seven years old. You have woven a great tribute to all mothers with the beauty of simplistic, honest and innocent images.

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Delicate Heart 30 April 2009

nice piece you become ome lost whilst reading it, written eloquently....10+

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~ Jon London ~ 24 April 2009

Your heart's loss can be felt through this beautiful tender piece 10+

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 22 April 2009

Motherhood aptly described.good poem my 10

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Wojja Fink 22 April 2009

love of Mother like no other make peace in war of sister brother brings moons rainbows joy galore and rememebered ever more, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , beautiful poem....

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