A Mother's Thoughts Comments

a poem of love and tenderness for mother mary.....and all mothers on mothers day.very well written, straight from the heart.best wishes. ritty

hey how are you? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? i just wanted to let you know that starting september 1 to november 1 i will be taking a break from ph just so i can spend a little bit more time with my family and get some new ideas for writing poems I also wanted to say thank you for your Support and encouragement, best wishes Janell

On her human part Mother Mary would have cried shedding bleeding tears...but on the contrary, knowing about her godly son she would have also remained calm..you are the first person to show concern for Mary on mother's day....congrats

A sun-darkened day; a global earthquake, Hearts all atremble; from graves dead awake, God’s crucified Son; pierced, lifeless you find; What thoughts that day…Went through your mind? What motherly thoughts… Went through your mind? .... beautiful clsh of views.. mother's thought very deep inspirational write.... good one read mine 'O, mother'. all the one same feelings but you will enjoy reading it

nice tribute to a nice person. who deserved the best in life.

'Unmercifully beaten, and heinously whipped, In His own blood, on the stone way He slipped; What thoughts that day…went through your mind? Man’s inhumanity to man; so cruel and so blind' yeah...mothers should be worshiped..loved///passionately loved..not brutally mutaliate...spread mothers love across the world sir..thank you 10++++

A wonderful tribute and peom evoking thought yes of the mother of alll mother'; s..with the same deep love that all have in consternation at why one of such power had to suffer as her Son did...

Mother's heart! How many heart piercing thoughts. What is mother's plight, when she thought of her son's miserable end? Wonderful write Sir. Amazing clarity, touching words and expressions.

THis is very heart wretching as is any depiction of the crucifixtion. I cry copious tears anytime and everytime I see the story of the sacrifice made for me. I sympathize with Mary as any Mother would and ache and cry for her terror and sadness but what Joy must have come to her at knowing the outcome. The proudest Mother on earth. Thank you Alf this needed to be written.

Beautiful Alf. A lovely way of portraying the Virgin Mary in the role of Mother on Mother's Day. It certainly makes one think about a lot of things. Well done. love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Her mind must be blank when she watched her son who was crucified not for some sin but for preaching love.....................A Good Write........

ever best poem sir! you did very well i really like it and thanks for sharing

Great poem man, The great love of the Mother is unfortunately tainted by 'Man’s inhumanity to man; so cruel and so blind'. Well written.

wonderful poem...lovely indeed...10

Good write there dear poet

Amazing composition,10 with love.

Truly a unique Poem of exceptional depth and emotion Thank you for inviting me to read it Tracy 10 plus

A unique poem Alf, with a truly touching take on what must have passed through Mary's mind as Mother following her son to his tragic death....Beautiful write meriting a 10+++

Only through God's grace can a mother understand and endure such pain. Your Mother's Day poem is so very thoughtfully & skillfully written. God bless you good man. He must be proud of you: -) Regards, T

touched me to the core