Sunday, May 13, 2012

A Mother's Prayer For Her Daughter Comments

Rating: 5.0

As days and months speeded by
We longed so deep to have you home
With starving eyes, we kept awake
And you came at last, to give us joy.
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Valsa George
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narayana aghalaya 08 October 2018

beautiful poem written from the heart. We understand every sentiment you have expressed-we have gone thro all those phases. thank you very much for sharing a lovely poem!

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Josey Alfred 04 March 2016

Very lovely poem, The mother is the only person who keeps praying and wishing for the well being of her children, and refresh her memories of her children, in her mind often. You have covered every aspect of growing with them. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 17 June 2015

Oh such a splendid poem! Mother's heart full with love and fond memories of daughter 's childhood, prays for her well being.It touches the core of heart.

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Rakhi Jayashankar 12 February 2015

ohhhh what a poem I myself am a mother of two I had tears in my eyes

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2014

A heart touching poem, who can pray better than a mother and who can serve a woman better than her daughter. A beautiful poem-10/10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 02 August 2014

A very touching poem indeed.......a child is always a child to her mother whether she is grown up or still her baby daughter.......mother always wishes her well being until the last breath of her life......Valsa........ That's why she is unmatched and unparalleled.......great write as always

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Sreelekha Premjit 08 March 2014

when I wrote an anthem to an angel... I echoed similar feelings... mothers and daughters..well said! !

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Lathaprem Sakhya 22 September 2013

Thoughts prayers that reverberate in me and I think in the hearts of all mothers of daughters.I loved it, Thank u

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Chandra Thiagarajan 10 February 2013

A fantastic poem written from the core of the heart which I relished whole-heartedly! I feel it is a replica of my own feelings towards my daughter!

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Kee Thampi 04 January 2013

this is the poem with a royal touch, great write from a great heart With warm embrace and kisses sweet We greeted you to our lonely nest Knowing too well, the day will come

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Thomas Hsi 12 September 2012

Wonderfully worded sentiments, and such a fitting ending.

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Thomas Hsi 12 September 2012

Wonderfully worded sentiments, and such a fitting ending.

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Walterrean Salley 02 September 2012

Beautiful tribute. Very heartwarming. 'Tis the sincere cry of a true mother, which any child can absolutely adore for her unconditional love.

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Of all 'creations' a mother happens to be the most marvellous. She needs to be understood her daughter[s] of all lands and all times. A mother is a true guardian angel well beyond the restrictions of a divine order imposed on the creations altogether.

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Joseph Anderson 25 August 2012

With much compassion you have created a moving tribute to one who has gone her way. You are blessed with great talent and I am certainly enjoying your work. Home and family, That is where are heart resides

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Barb Mcavaney 06 August 2012

A mothers love is forever, something we all cherish your poetry is beautiful

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 14 May 2012

Truly a mother's love is stronger than all, such a heart warming poem, words beautiful threaded together a spider's web. when I that time, I just wish my tot could stay my tot forever, with her big round eyes and that cute snile to bless me for ever, thanks for sharing this beautiful poem! ...Siya_! !

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