Thursday, July 31, 2008

A Mother's Plea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Caught in the middle
Of love strong-as-death
Waiting forever
For signs of redress.
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Fay Slimm
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I really enjoyed the structure. # 1 poet thou art

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Scott Austin 03 December 2008

This is a very heart touching write, I know this feeling so well myself from a father’s view. Thank you for sharing your work with us and may peace and joy feel your heart each and everyday. Many blessings to you. Scott

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Adeline Foster 01 December 2008

I liked how this poem seemed to span a lifetime. Hope you have time to read my “Many a Mother”. Adeline

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Marilyn Lott 25 October 2008

Beautifully written from deep within your heart. Such a difficult time with children. I raised two children alone when their dad died and there were lots of joy but so lonely when things went astray, as they always do when raising them and after they've grown as well. Great poem, Fay. A '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Ron Flowers 15 October 2008

A very sad, but beautiful poem. Warmest regards Ron

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Dawn Slanker 29 August 2008

Lovely, love filled poem wrought from the heart.

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Marvin Brato 21 August 2008

A mother is always loving and forgiving, she holds no bounds for her care for her sons and daughters A 10.!

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Rehab Helmy 14 August 2008

Strongest of love-ties, Motherhood's tears. really this is a mother's heart, deep and full of love, caring and sacrifices. a very impressive piece

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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