Friday, June 3, 2005

A Mother's Love Comments

Rating: 4.7

Her love so unconditional
She holds you close to her breast
In an embrace that makes you feel safe
And when everything is afright
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Theodore Linden Jay Rosenberg
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earyt etr 06 June 2005

Sappy, yet sweet. Work on your rhythym, and you just might write something good. Keep writing! ; -)

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