Sunday, April 13, 2008

A Mother's Last Favor Comments

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My cellphone rings,
Bad news it brings.
A dear friend is now lying,
On her hospital bed dying.
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Abha Sharma 08 May 2008

a sensitive poem...cancer is fatal but the promise to support the daughter brings a compassionate attitude...well composed.. **abha**

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Jacqueline Mkindi 26 April 2008

You have very unique touch.This is one of those!

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Paul Butters 18 April 2008

A very difficult subject sensitively and skilfully expressed. Paul.

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This is absolutely heartbreaking (quite part from well-penned) and I wish you all the utmost of luck. t x

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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