Monday, September 8, 2008

A Mother's Lament Comments

Rating: 5.0

I float through time,
In and out of place,
Deep down in the waters, I can breathe.
My lungs are dry, no longer in use,
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Can I Live?
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Daniel Wheeler 08 September 2008

good write. it's confusing at parts but only due to my lack of imagination. rated it 10

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