Monday, July 6, 2009

A Mother's Heart. Comments

Rating: 4.5

Mother's heart is always so PURE,
That always makes you CURE.
Mother's heart always WORRIES,
When she hears kids QUERIES.
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anju addanki
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 29 March 2020

A beautiful tribute to all mums ceremoniously rich in tone. Lovely and very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing, Anju.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 May 2010

very nice! for those who have lost their mothers at an early age, your poem moves. i was moved. thank u vry much. invite u to read my poems too and comment. thank u

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Kannan G 03 April 2010

A beautiful tribute to universal motherhood! Excellent. Read mine......... “My Mother and This World”

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 February 2010

Fantastic and mindblowing...10 again.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2009

When we always ASK. Mother's heart is always at CALL, When we always FALL. Mother's heart is always RIGHT, When we take things LIGHT.......it is always mother so universal figure to help us in critical and all the times.. we are incompelte without her and saddens us evenfor slight disapparence of her for litle time...lovely and praise worthy poem......10 raad mine mother series....o, mother, , , momi miss u..mom i cry eventoday..mother and i wept.. mom where are you?

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Ravi A 25 September 2009

A very nice write with a rhyming towards the end of every line. The repetitive quality of 'Mother's heart' does take away the charm of the poem. You may use pronouns instead. Also the ending word of every line need not be capitalised like this. Leave everything to its naturality and the reader would definitely pick up the essence of the poem. You may read my two or three poems writeen on motherhood rather than on mothers - 'The deepness of motherhood', 'Tht annals of life', 'Mother- a caring wind'. To praise our mothers can be one thing but to look at motherhood in its toto has its own deepest emotive levels. This is my personal view.

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Meggie Gultiano 18 September 2009

Yes, I agree.Wise words..A lovely write.

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Rup Pokharel 15 September 2009

Hi Anju Very beautiful piece of art of your i got to read. Forsure you have seen the real part of Mother's caring heart. I liked your piece.10+++ if you can spare time you can see once my DYING MA and WOMAN

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Atyam Sruti 14 July 2009

its a great and lovely poem......very touchy........u made our mother proud with this poem of urs......

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dr veenaa rai 14 July 2009

god cdn't be everywhere, so he made mothers.nice one.

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Patrick A. Martin 13 July 2009

Nice work Anju I am reading lots of mother verse lately - yours is sweet

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Chitra - 10 July 2009

tender, gentle write on the most important personality! 10+

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Lady Grace 06 July 2009

a mother's heart is perfect, beautiful and fair..grace

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rago rago 06 July 2009

light beautiful tenderly written poem............exactly reflects mother`s heart......

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