Wednesday, December 28, 2011

A Mother's Final Goodbye Comments

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It happens to all, in this life we lead,
When someone we love and care for, goes to seed.
They suffer in agony sometimes for years,
And you see it all through bitter tears.
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Juan Olivarez
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Claudia Krizay 03 January 2012

A beautiful poem, Juan- it so reminds me of my own mother who died twenty years ago- It seemed as if she was there with me and just a few days later she died. You definitely have a way with words- and I would like to wish you a happy new year, Juan! _Claudia

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Smoky Hoss 28 December 2011

Juan this is indeed one of the most beautiful poems I've read. My own mother is now nearly 88, so this strikes deep... very deep. Great write my friend.

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