A Mother's Fear Comments

you inpire me i hope one day i can be thar good at writing read mine and please give me some input

I love this one, it is beautiful

Mother's have so many fears even after their out and on their own...There's like a constant nudge in your heart and tummy...I never experieced this but I did get the warning 'beer on the beach' phone call..I think when they're out late at night, while still living at home, in the cars we gave them, we just pray they're safe..This is a sobering and sad, touch your heart poem...hugs, marci.xo

the motherly touch of vindicate.... She prays that her boy is safe and calms her doubting fears. At half past two, beams from headlights flood the driveway. Relieved

I just finished reading your other poem, A Letter To Everyone'. This one has more feeling and comes closer to experiencing that horrible moment.

Hi! You sent me a message but I did not get to read what it was. Can you send it again. Thanks. I am new at this. I like this poem and I sympathize with you. Ben Gieske