A Mother's Collection: Tissues, Bones, And Blood (Second) Comments

The power of a mothers love...Brilliant write! Well done: D

Inspite of Mike grew young, ‘…Now my dear, you’re on your own. GO! Soar toward the sky, keeping your spirit high….’ The propelling force is words of MOM…’ The warm air that blows in your ears is mommy whispering “son I love you and will always be a current of air underneath your wings.’…it’s the magic Vox of Mom’s vibeutterance… Extraordinary passionate poem of a MOM Enjoyed in length 10+++ Ms. Nivedita UK

'You're a vintage wine and I the winemaker'. There are a multitude of understandings here. Well penned.

GO! Soar toward the sky, keeping your spirit high. The warm air that blows in your ears is mommy whispering “son I love you and will always be a current of air underneath your wings. the second is amzing poem too! you exteriorized your wisdom in this work... I loved it very much! such feelings must be written to sense it more and more and to make it ETERNAL... 10 for your Wise Advices and for the deep feelings...

forming a little salty pool in the crease of his neck. I wanted to yell out “Put him back in his safe home”. But knowing that was not possible, I had to nurture this fruit from my womb. a person has to undergo two unbearable pains in the lie time... one is death and second is pregnancy.. woman has to pass both and where as manhas to pass only one.. this makes mother's position unique....10 i loved it in its depth... read mine mom i miss u..i cry even today

Elmedia, this second piece is so emotive and I had to blink back tears. The use of the title is such beautiful imagery. His way of getting you to look is so cute. The last stanza is amazing.... 10 Karin Anderson

Loved reading this! Thanks, roshni.