# A Mother's Chide Comments

great thought you are good 10

Your magic with words is simply spellbinding....this is an outstanding poem.

mother's chide is good for the child. your poem expresses a child's bewilderment so well. Mamta

a touching poem indeed 10++

wonderful thoughts...brilliant write....10

a very important write.... words are enough to let us know the message... a thing to think of... a give and take... Mother nature will give what she takes from us... thanks for sharing, Sam 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

good thinking...good write...10

Nature's tears forever fall..........Her pain....by the hand of mankind........She shows her anger.....we live among-st her temper.....do we learn....we never do. Excellent form Sam...on a topic....more should pay attention to...well brought out my friend 10

Nature finds it's way in the end

Mother nature is always kind. It is the man who misuses the kindness of the mother nature.

a very nice write 10

Mother Nature does everything based on cause and effect!

A mother chides for the well being of her children and warns for their safety. If only we listen to her....how well would this life become. Angel

It`s beautiful to get scared................

wow what a dramatic monologue dear........talking to mother nature! I can feel your words uttering on the wind! ! !

Firstly I liked the composition and the structure of your work. Ending verse is really good. Nice one.

wonderful poem sir. Mother nature indeed sometimes scares even more than it enchants when it is serene. But alas our folly leads to this 'scare'. Excellent poem sir.