A Mother Child Comments

Wonderfully flowing, familiar to everyone yet quite special in itself. Very nicely done. -T. Bell

'A mother is a child She is younger than her children That is why she learns from them' Those lines rival anything I've seen these past few months for sheer poetic excellence- indeed the whole poem is mature, concise and insightful. Your poems are written fror a reason and I like that.

what a different poem. no one writes like this anymore. i love it. love always, starr

Wow, quite an amazing, touching poem....lots of imagry....excellent.

'...A being not be seen...' A typo I think but otherwise a very touching poem, congrats!

You my young sir......are spectacular

Of overcoming sin, you have some good lines

please comment thanks alot.......... Inkweaver