A Mother And A Toddler Comments

this s a good writing hon, but it made me cry...tragic ending..

you let your feelings go to show and make people feel the pain and heart break of this poem

So heartbreaking, but all too real. Great job of putting down the pain. Best Wishes, Marilyn

This was a clear recitation of a tragedy all too common with a common question attached. Let the question be asked again and again, until it is answered. GW62

you have a good imagination so thats wat draw me to ur poems

Very nice poem. Enjoyed it very much. Take a look at Athul and Akhil who are young poets. But their poems are super.

Nice use of ambiguity to create an emotional response good work thanks

avery touching poem. it creates the entire scene so vividly.

yusof-Your poem is deep and well expressed. Your imagery is great, and gave me shudders while I read your poem. It has a great impact. You have the ability to write very strong poetry, my friend. Katherine

Job well done my friend.