Tuesday, June 16, 2009

A Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

Of everything in life, your mother truly is the greatest gift of all,
She supports you through each moment and is there if you should fall.
An unbreakable bond is formed from the moment you first meet,
A love so strong is felt, there’s nothing that could compete.
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Brooke Luchich
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Eliza Willoughby 13 August 2009

i think that you are a beautiful writer, and that you put alot of emotion and thought into what you write. :)

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Ahtivah Lawton 02 July 2009

my poem entitled 'Mother' is actually the opposite..gotta read it..srry 2 keep writing u stuff..but ur poems are so intriguing!

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Rochelle Bell 20 June 2009

wow that is actually a really beautiful poem! my friend who is also new to this, her name is Shay Chesney if you want to see her poems, she wrote 2 poems about her mom who died when she was 3 and her dad left and also did drugs. But i bet she would REALLY like your poems too!

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Brooke Luchich

Brooke Luchich

Darwin, NT
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