A Moth Wonder Comments

Well-written, Joe. Keep writing...

My first encounter...A moth wonder, ...so captivating...looking forwards to read more..! Thanks

Captivating read, full of imagination. Loved it! ; D

Great poem with good imagery enjoyed reading it....

Looking at me while it orbits my head. Maybe wondering if I am really dead.... lot of things for hidden message.. really nice one o understand and capture imagination.. I enjoyed it full....10

A page from a tick of time...ready to crystalize alas no branches in your hair, images galore nice, regards

Moths are great as your poem Joe! And many thanks indeed for your lovely comment.

Onward the moth flutters away. Only to hide for another day. how nice.10 marks. shan

I'm frightened of moths.

Hey Poewhit.... tis a HYMeNoptera metamorph that you sing here.... that takes a moth of wonder, to the mother of all wonders... entomololgy bite me! ! !

ahh the moth, they don't live too long and are such fragile creatures but if I see one on my clothes or carpet they're dead meat heh heh..... I loved your ode to the moth and will study them with new eyes now.... Ruthy

THE MOTH PERHAPS UNDERSTANDS A LOT FROM OUR HAND WAVE

yeah great imagery indeed...liked it very much..nice one 10++

Gentle imagery of the fragile moth - to be admired for its tenacity against the odds...a wonderful tribute

a tender moment with one of the creatures that share our planet with us...

Joe, I like the A Moth Wonder. I think if you rewrite it and make it leaner it will be even more striking. Thank you.

Superb use of metaphors and imagery in this poem Joe....great write 10+ from me

I sit in a supreme bliss.The world spins around in it's full perfection.............when u are in bliss, indeed world spins around you in perfection........Good Write.........

A wave of the hand, to keep it still.. Does it really! ... nice metaphor..excellent read mine 'TO A HAIRY MOTH'

Cute, fun and a bit dreamy. I liked it.