Tuesday, August 11, 2009

A Most Beautiful Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.3

Today melts into tomorrow
gone is my sorrow.
Now the pinnacle of my day
you've chased all my tears away.
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Angelic Warrior
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Aditya Mudbhary 17 October 2009

Lovely poem i was really into it frm the start to end lol gr8 poem

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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwww. God bless you.. may you find this

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Afzal Shauq 11 August 2009

I suddenly feel warm and shy you bend your head to mine your lips feel heavenly divine. I'm lost with you, but always at home. Together, a unity, wherever we roam. great job and wonderful poem..meaningful and done with very much poetic way..the flow is good and melodic..liked the idea and enough impressive..well written poem.. appreciate your work..well done 10/10

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