A Mortal Masterpiece Comments
She sits before me, an infallible piece
A masterwork of bone, sinew, and skin
Defying perfection her fairest cheeks and feminine chin
Her form crafted and carved as a statue of ancient Greece
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beautifully praised beauty- and congrats being placed poem for the day thank you
congrats on being poem of the day! everything is a masterpiece here, the poem, the subject of the poem, and the manner in which it is written....
Like this. Lo is a bit fussy, and why capitalise Winged Victory? , but a solid piece of work.
A master class of poetry. Beautifully coined lines. A picture in words.
Defining a beauty with a masterpiece. It doesnt get better than this.
the poem is simple yet meaningful..Loving is not owning.Just let it go.He may be broke and jealous most of the times because of being far away with the girl symbolize by aphrodite or venus de milo, but he can be happier and wiser just by letting things happen.I also believe that if two people are meant to be..fate will find a way.
The poem itself is a masterpiece. The last stanza uplifts the whole poem and turns it from personal to universal meanings.
one of the best i read yet. i am surprise that one is not famous yet.
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7/23/2025 6:57:31 AM # 1.0.0
Great poem. You have treated a mortal masterpiece as a valuable personal possession initially. But thanks to the metamorphosis, you have decided to liberate the masterpiece for the collective aesthetic bliss of the world. Thanks.