Monday, October 29, 2007

A Mornings Word 10/29/07 Comments

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Lost up in a world
that I don't understand
Caught up in a situation
and told to be a man
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wordsy wright
chaos Flood
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Lucianne Fasolo 29 October 2007

Good write, :) But shouldn't it be drowned instead of 'drown'? It sort of breaks the verb pattern in the poem. And did you mean hailed, not 'haled'? Just minor things, don't worry: P

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