Thursday, October 25, 2007

A Mornings Word 10/25/07 Comments

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In a moment filled with anger
a lifetime of regret
and a feeling that does linger
that I cannot forget
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Lucianne Fasolo 25 October 2007

You meant does when you wrote 'doeth'? : P You wrote does in the first stanza. You don't need two forms... lol. Good poem. I liked it.

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