Monday, February 6, 2012

A Morning Letter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Good Morning girl, did I interrupt?
The dreams from the late thoughts,
Can I bring reality from what your imagination thought up?
I got that deep love.
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Stevens Cadet
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Cosmic Dreamer 25 October 2012

In the flush of love a mind clogs and a tongue swells, yet emotions are something we struggle to hide... Love is the very thing we are here for... I liked your poem very much... Thank you...

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 October 2012

A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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Lucia Domingos Fula 24 October 2012

WOW i love it.very wonderful, she's a lucky charm! thanks for sharing!

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Kelvin Owusu 23 October 2012

This is a great read, nice way to end the piece also

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Dave Walker 23 October 2012

A fantastic poem, I always found it hard to say what I felt, I also find it better to write it down.

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Ramesh T A 23 October 2012

A homely love you have depicted is quite interesting to read! keep it up!

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Asif Andalib 22 October 2012

Go ahead show your deep love to your dear lady. Good write. I like it

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Anni Chin 22 October 2012

great one loved it........

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Adeline Foster 16 March 2012

Ah, I percieve that you need a cheri. The request is noted. Adeline

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