Monday, February 16, 2009

A Morning In Paradise Comments

Rating: 4.0

In the scissor star cut
morning, the sleeping ocean
gently awakens from brilliant
appollion sun rays;
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Heather Wilkins 09 December 2013

well written piece of poetry enjoyed your descriptive words

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Oluko George 17 February 2009

so sweet a poem....we all picturise the scene...big up!

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Indira Renganathan 17 February 2009

Well done...'royal blue pool, running....like the luminous lining of sexy new dress.'beautiful description..congrats10

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